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#8Sunday Opening Lines: Afterglow #Romantic Comedy

7/12/2015

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Since it's important to get the reader into the story fairly quickly, a good opening line is essential. Afterglow is a romantic comedy featuring a heroine of a certain age, a kind of book sometimes called hen lit, which is a term I'm not particularly fond of, so lets just call it a funny story about a woman named India, whose life has gone along a predictable path up until now, when it hit the skids. As the book opens, she's left her husband of thirty one years and she's feeling a bit out of sorts (to say the least).  

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My first affair with Cherry Garcia lasted nearly three weeks. It ended when my best friend, Eva, threw a shoe at my head. My Reebok sneaker to be exact. “Enough,” said Eva from the bedroom door. “You cannot wallow forever. Besides which, I am getting very
tired of walking alone. I’ve started talking to myself, for God's sake. I’ve started talking to the dogs along the way.” She raised her arms like a conductor ready to strike up the band. “Get your hiney downstairs in five minutes or I will dress you myself.”

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Veronica Scott link
7/12/2015 04:18:21 am

Always good to have a best friend who'll tell it like it is. Enjoyed the snippet!

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Ute Carbone
7/12/2015 05:55:11 am

Thanks, Veronica. Eva is a good friend. Most of the time, anyway. :)

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Eden Mabee link
7/17/2015 04:06:37 pm

Sounds like a wonderful best friend.... if a bit uncomfortable to be around too.

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